Built: Making the Most Muscular Woman

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2 weeks 20 hours ago #136778 by JGMuscle
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Here is a review from 009Eli on saradas for those of you who might be curious about the book's content (warning sort of a spoiler):

Hey--
So I’m about 2/3rds of the way through and just wanted to jump in here and post my thoughts on this because I personally am loving the book and don’t. even. Want. It. To. End. To me this may be one of my favorite (if not my current favorite muscle stories ever written.) I’ve read all of TCs books and this is my favorite so far (with his first one being a close second). To me this book is almost perfect. It seems to combined the perfect aspects of Sabre’s Muscle Sex, the best of Mr Shh’s insane growth stories with the warmth and intimacy of something like Lisa’ Path.

The story follows Drew who after the death of his first wife is given a gift when when his wife heart is used to save the life of the daughter of a wealthy pharmaceutical executive. The exec gives Drew enough money that he’ll never have to worry about working again. But there’s something else Drew wants. He dreams of having a woman in his life stronger than him. The exec also gives him an experimental serum that builds muscle with no side effects and not just some. A lot.

Enter Lizzy a woman on the run from her past who is taking care of her daughter. When Drew and Lizzy meet he offers her a chance to work for him. Soon they draw close and Drew shares his desire to be with a woman so muscular she can over power him. Far from being put off, Lizzy is intrigued and so begins her journey with the help of the serum to not just become muscular but to become the strongest, most muscular woman the world has ever known.

With Andrew’s help and the help of serum she locks herself away working out building her body for hours on end… much to Drews growing delight and also horror as she soon finds that Lizzy may be more dedicated to building her body far past even his greatest desires.

The story is amazing because not only does it do a great job of tracking Lizzy’s muscle growth but it also does an amazing job of detailing the relationship between Drew and Lizzy. You feel for Drew and root for him after losing wife and see what a carring man he is in how he loves his own daughter, as well as Lizzy and her desire to win Drews love that you really begin to root for them as a couple.

Also the story is super hot. The muscle descriptions (which are my favorite) have this amazing way of putting you right in the scene and each chapter almost acts as a set piece tracking their growing relationship and Lizzy’s growing bulk. Reading some of them you feel as if youve strapped on a VR headset and under doing these intense muscle scenes in first person :woohoo:

Another awesome aspect is TC’s ability to tie into how a muscular woman is judged by society. The story unlike so many muscle stories is just as hot outsie the bedroom as inside as you see how Lizzy reacts to the new found attention her growing musculature bestows on her. My favorite chapter so far is when she attends her daughters play recital in a jaw dropping outfit that makes her the talk of the entire night.

I hope TC won’t mind but this how it plays in the book:

“When I asked Lizzy to wear something revealing for the school play I had only been partially kidding. I thought with all of the hard work she was putting in, it was ridiculous to try and hide herself. She should be proud of it, I thought. After my urgings, I figured she’d wear a conservative dress that might show some of her shoulders or back and I would be a bit disappointed. When she emerged from the bathroom I was literally stunned. She had died her hair jet black and ringed her eyes with a heavy shade of eye liner and mascara into a much thicker than normal cat’s eye look. She wore a sleeveless scoop-neck, black short dress that ended before her knees. It accentuated the substantial thighs underneath, which remained only partially hidden. Her pecs emerged in thick tiers of muscle edging out the top of the dress and seemed to almost swell to her neckline. Monumental wings pushed at the edges of her dress and accentuated her already significant V-taper. Her arms were bare and it was evident that she not only died her hair, but had put on artificial tan which gave her her arms even greater definition and highlighted her muscular peak. She wore black laced army boots that ended at her intensely striated calves, which flexed as she walked and bent down. She looked like a well-honed bicyclist whose calves twitched and bulged with each step. Around her tiny waist, she wore a black belt with oversized silver holes and buckle. Long, fake black finger nails completed her amazing ensemble. I dropped my jaw in awe unsure of how to respond. I’d gotten exactly what I asked for. She was going to be the center of everyone’s attention until the performance started, whether they liked it or not. This was so unlike her I was dumbfounded.
She put her hands on her hips and her shoulders jutted out and accentuated her V-taper even further. Her thick veiny forearms were clamped by a silver bracelet and drew even more attention to her muscular arms. “Is this what you wanted?” ”

And this is just one chapter. Each chapter seems to turn up the heat offering a new and varying dynamic and to Lizzy’s growth! Again just great writing to me this book would receive my highest rating 5Biceps up. Great work! I will say as per the previous comment I have noticed so formatting issues namely with things in parenthesis that shouldn’t be but this hasn’t really interfered with my reading it. Also as far as the being disappointed with Lizzy’s growth I will say that right now she is being described as being as big or bigger them Mr. O competitors so for me this is pretty much in line with what the poll TC had so I have not been disappointed at all. All around great work and great read for those who like long form storytelling

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1 week 46 minutes ago #136824 by QBikk
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Hey all,

So I finished the book, here's a review I wrote a few minutes ago. It might give undecided people an idea of what to expect, before getting it.

The fourth book by Richard Greye takes a different turn compared to the previous ones. The first person narration deepens, as he provides us a more detailed story with Built. It deals with a person, Andrew, who has trouble finding his equilibrium in life, through his choices or just plain bad luck.

He then reaches a point in his life where he can throw caution to the wind and give in to his most secret desires, muscular women. But not unlike fitness models mind you, VERY muscular ones. I mean big. Following all the events in his life, Andrew finds himself exploring and understanding his desires, with ups and downs along the way. This path forges him an opportunity to literally build the mate of his dreams.

The book offers a detailed insider view about the feelings of this man, going through his quest for a muscular woman. It is very well detailed and gives the impression to take the place of Andrew. It is a mix between very descriptive phase, about the events of his life and his action toward muscular women, but as well about the psychological aspect and the sometimes funny situations such men find themselves in.

But unlike many stories or book we read today, Built offers a detailed point of view from the woman’s perspective. Indeed, the author’s book is supported by his wife Jayne, who brings a balance of feelings and the real point of view from the muscular women perspective. Another theme of the novel is the shift in their relationship as her power grows.

The story explains the path taken by Andrew, the advantages and disadvantages he has to deal with along the way. From looking for a strong dominant lady, to wondering how dominating the lady of his dreams will become. Albeit lovingly, he gets to have not any muscular woman, but the most muscular on earth, along with a domination streak which surprises her as well.

Excerpt from the book, if the author minds, please let me know I’ll remove it:

Her bunched up, massive glutes tied into a litany of muscles which a red dress tried in vain to cover. The picture was taken from behind, but the outer sweep of her fully developed quads were so enormous that they seemed to wrap around her legs and merge with densely packed hamstrings. Tanned, oiled, and striated, her muscles bulged and looked intensely powerful. Thickly detailed, veiny calves exploded out of her lower legs, cut up into a series of densely muscled ridges, running all the way up her legs. Next to it was a note from Lizzy. Too small!
“Holy shit, those legs are incredible.” I professed, hoping it would lead to a discussion about Lizzy’s seemingly monumental goals.
She wasn’t deterred from her mission. “Andrew.”
“Yah, I’m sorry. What ‘fun thing’ do you want?”
She grew quiet and looked at herself in her tiny mirror fiddling with her hair. With much hesitancy she almost whispered, “I’d like a mirror on the ceiling and the wall.”
I laughed then frowned, “Wait, you’re serious?”
“Yes,” she looked down as if embarrassed.
“Why?”
She hummed and hawed, “I put all this work in and I want to see what I look like.”
“You’re not getting vain about your body, are you?”
She reached over and grabbed my hand hard as I teased her. A quick flick of rage showed that my teasing wasn’t the right tact with her and she seemed caught off guard. My hand throbbed in pain under her powerful grip, but I didn’t let her know it hurt, intent on keeping my pride intact. Subconsciously, I began to fear that her demonstration of anger might be a delayed side effect of the serum. It also could have been that she didn’t know her strength or perhaps it involved her experiences with sexual assail and I had struck a nerve with the put down. My knees began to buckle under her grip and my arm began to shake. I’m not sure if it was from fear of her power or from the pain. There was no longer any doubt that she was stronger than I.


Each chapter brings further character and plot development, with surprises along the way. If you like well-constructed stories with personable characters and strong women, I highly recommend this novel.

QBikk

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4 days 23 hours ago #136839 by JGMuscle
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Thanks for the great review QB. I've written a supplemental chapter for those who might have interest in how the story progresses after the 'finish.' It has a pretty steamy sex scene (at least as far as I've written so far). Here is the link: www.smashwords.com/books/view/948865

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